proposal (Jasmine and Jacob)

-Jasmine should face more toward the camera so that audience can see the facial expression better, and talk louder.

-Jacob should memorize monologue and lines more correctly

put more emotion while reading the lines, expression

Conclude well (the ending part and last monologue)

-more prepared costumes

-put more background music

-backlight for changing scene (blocking)

-Clearly showing the face toward the audience

-more be dynamic while dancing or blocking on the stage